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Band 5+: To what extent does globalization contribute to the erosion of cultural identity?

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From my perspective, globalization is the major cause of the appearance of numerous cultures. The reason behind this is that globalization has introduced different cultural traditions to various locations, providing local people with more choices of cultures to select from. If there is a culture that is popular, beneficial to follow, and appropriate for their lives, this culture tends to be chosen and adopted by the people. This can increase the level of competition among new cultures from different countries and the original culture in the country, and if the original culture cannot...

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From my perspective, globalization is the major cause of this appearance of numerous cultures. The reason behind this is that globalization have introduced different culture traditions to the different locations, this can provide local people more choice of cultures to select. If there is a culture that is popular, good to follow and appropriate for their life, This culture tends to be chosen and applied by the people. And this can increase the level of competition among the new culture from different countries and original culture in the country and if the culture like original culture cannot…

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culture: 4

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cultures: 3

this: 3

globalization: 2

different: 2

people: 2

original: 2

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Task Response

The response attempts to address the question but lacks clarity and depth. The ideas presented are somewhat relevant but not fully developed or logically connected. The response could benefit from more specific examples and a clearer articulation of the relationship between globalization and cultural identity.

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