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Band 6+: To what extent does globalization contribute to the erosion of cultural identity?

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I think that cultural identity is something really important for people, especially young people, because it can affect everything, and they should be proud of their culture and where they came from. I don't think cultural identity should be replaced by anything, sorry. As I said before, people should be proud of their culture. Social media sometimes ruins things in their lives, but I guess it is something that cannot be affected by social media. You should have your own opinion.

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I think that culture identity is something that really important for people, especially young people, because I guess that they can affect on anything and they should be proud about their culture and where did they came from? I don’t think culture identity should be replaced to anything, sorry. And actually people, as I said before, be proud of their culture and Social media sometimes ruins things in their life, but I guess that it is something that you cannot be affected on social media. You should have your own opinion.

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should: 4

people: 3

their: 3

think: 2

cultural: 2

identity: 2

something: 2

proud: 2

culture: 2

social: 2

media: 2

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Task Response

The response touches on the importance of cultural identity but lacks a clear and comprehensive discussion of how globalization impacts it. The ideas presented are somewhat repetitive and could benefit from more specific examples or developed arguments. Consider exploring the different facets of globalization and their potential effects on cultural identity, providing a more balanced and nuanced perspective.

Fluency & Coherence

The answer demonstrates some coherence, but there are noticeable hesitations and self-corrections ('sorry'). The ideas are somewhat connected, but the flow could be smoother. To improve, practice speaking more continuously and use cohesive devices more effectively to link ideas.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate but lacks precision and variety. The language used is quite basic. To enhance lexical resource, try to incorporate more specific and nuanced vocabulary related to culture, identity, and globalization. For example, instead of 'ruins things,' use 'detrimentally impacts' or 'undermines aspects of.'

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The answer contains grammatical errors, such as 'culture identity' instead of 'cultural identity,' and awkward phrasing like 'they can affect on anything.' The range of grammatical structures is limited. To improve, focus on using a wider range of grammatical structures accurately and pay attention to common errors.

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