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I believe that there are numerous dangers for startups during the initial stages of their development. Firstly, it is clear that startups typically operate with limited margins, which poses significant challenges to running the business effectively. Additionally, startups often struggle to compete with more established companies that have greater resources and market presence.

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I believe that there are numerous ways for startups during the initial stages of its development. Firstly, it is clear that startups typically operate with limited margins which poses significant challenges to running the business effectively. Additionally, startups often struggle to compete with more established companies that have greater resources and market presence.

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Task Response

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The answer is coherent and well-structured, with a clear introduction and two supporting points. The fluency is good, although there is one minor grammatical error ('its' instead of 'their'). Minor improvements in phrasing could enhance the overall flow.

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