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Band 6+: What are the advantages and disadvantages of living in a multicultural society?

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As a person who lives in Kyrgyzstan, a multicultural country where there are many nationalities, such as Kyrgyz, Russians, and even English people, I can indicate the advantages of living here among multiple nations. First of all, I want to mention the pros of this lifestyle. I enjoy and adore the diversity represented in our country. I love the way you can communicate with almost every nation. I love seeing how other people talk about their religion, their traditions, and so on. This is entertaining and broadens your worldview. However, these advantages are also associated with other cultures and traditions. For example, if you're a Muslim, you must not eat pork, but there are European or Russian people here who sell pork in the bazaar. This creates a unique energy.
Actual audio transcript (What native speakers are likely to hear):

As a person who lives in Kyrgyzstan, that is being a multicultural country where there’s a lot of nationalities living here, curgis, russians, even english people, i can indicate advantages and it is advantages of living here among multi nations. First of all i want to mention pros of this lifestyle. I just enjoy, I adore the diversity that is being represented in our country. I love the way you can communicate with every nation, almost every nation. I love seeing, you know, how other people talking about their religion, the thing about their tradition and etc. this is entertaining and this is broadens your worldview but these advantages is also associated with other culture other traditions because if you’re a Muslim you must not for example eat pork and there’s are there are European or Russian people here that are selling pork whenever they are in Bazaar and so So this is the energy.

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Overall Band Score

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Vocabulary Complexity:
C1 - Intricate
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Vocabulary Repetition:
people: 3
this: 3
country: 2
there: 2
advantages: 2
other: 2
their: 2
traditions: 2
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Pronunciation

6
Your pronunciation is above average. However, you may find complexity in certain words challenging. Regular practice should aid in improvement.

Task Response

6
The response addresses the question by discussing the advantages and disadvantages of living in a multicultural society, using Kyrgyzstan as an example. The advantages are somewhat elaborated on, but the disadvantages could be more clearly articulated and developed. The response could benefit from a more balanced discussion of both advantages and disadvantages, and a more general perspective rather than relying heavily on personal experience.

Fluency & Coherence

7
The answer is generally coherent, but there are some hesitations and self-corrections that slightly affect the flow. Using more cohesive devices could improve the structure. For example, transition words like 'furthermore' or 'on the other hand' could be used to link ideas more smoothly.

Lexical Resource

7
The vocabulary is adequate but could be more precise and varied. The phrase 'the thing about their tradition' is a bit vague. Try to use more specific vocabulary related to cultural interactions and societal benefits/challenges. For example, instead of 'the thing about their tradition,' you could say 'their cultural practices' or 'their traditional customs.'

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

7
There are some grammatical errors, such as incorrect verb conjugations ('there's a lot of nationalities living here') and awkward phrasing ('this is the energy'). While these errors don't significantly impede understanding, improving grammatical accuracy would enhance the overall quality of the response. Focus on using correct verb tenses and sentence structures.

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