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Band 5+: What are the advantages and disadvantages of living in a multicultural society?

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This is an interesting question. When there are zero cultures existing in a society, it could bring both potential benefits and drawbacks. Firstly, to talk about the benefits, a multicultural society could help people from different cultures to experience each other's cultures more easily, and it can also attract tourists to visit because travelers can experience variety when visiting the same place. However, there are also drawbacks, as it can disrupt the preservation of one's culture when there is a mixture of several cultures together.

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This is an interesting question. When there are zero cultural existing in a society, it could bring both potential benefits and also the drawbacks. Firstly, to talk about the benefits. It is a multi-cultural society could help people from different cultures to experience the others culture more easy and it can also attract the tourists to visit because the travelers can experience variety when visiting the same place but there are also zero dropouts as They will… it can destruct the preserving of one’s culture when they are mixture of several cultures together.

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benefits: 2

drawbacks: 2

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