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Band 6+: What are the potential benefits and risks of personalized education approaches?

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Oh, that's an interesting one because I enjoy personalized education. When you do something that was created for you, for your skills and interests, it can make significant changes in your learning. For example, you learn a language with your tutor, and your tutor adapts to your individual learning style. I think it makes a huge difference because it makes studying so much easier.

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Oh, that’s an interesting one because I enjoy personalized education because when you do something that is, um, was created for you, for your skills that you have, for your interests that you have. It is… I think it can make a significant changes to a… in your learning. For example, you learn some language with your tutor and your tutor makes you an individual learning style and I think it just makes a huge difference because it makes studying so much easier and so

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