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Band 5+: What are the potential long-term consequences of the growing popularity of personalized medicine?

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I believe that the growing popularity of personalized medicine has potential long-term consequences. Everyone thinks this is the right approach, and everyone is looking at Google and finding some useless information. When you are sick, you're searching on Google and you might say, 'I'm very sick. I could have cancer.' I think this is harmful, and if it increases, it can be very helpful to medicine. However, I don't know.

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I believe that growing popularity of personalized medicine, potential, long-term consequences. Everyone think this is the right and everyone looking at the Google and finding some useless information. And when you are sick, you’re searching from Google and oh, you say, I’m very sick. I can be a cancer maybe. And I don’t know, I think this is just harmful and if it’s, and if it will be increased and it can be very helpful to med from medicine, I don’t know.

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