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Band 7+: What are the things that make people feel proud of?

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What are the things that make people feel proud? I think people feel proud when they have done something well for themselves. For example, achieving success in a field they are passionate about. Individuals can feel proud when they graduate from university or when they make a positive impact on someone's life. Additionally, when they complete any difficult tasks in their life, they feel proud due to overcoming these challenging situations.

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What are the things that make people feel proud of? I think people feel proud when they have done something well for themselves. For example, achieving success in a field they are passionate about. Individuals can feel proud when they graduate from university or when they make a positive impact on someone’s life. As well as when they complete any difficult tasks on their life, they feel proud due to completing this difficult situation.

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Vocabulary Repetition:

they: 6

feel: 4

when: 4

proud: 3

people: 2

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Task Response

The answer is quite good and covers the main aspects of the question. Consider expanding on the examples provided to give a more detailed and nuanced response. Exploring different facets of pride, such as national pride or pride in one's family, would further enhance the answer.

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The answer is well-structured and coherent. The ideas flow logically. Minor repetition ('feel proud') could be reduced for improved fluency. Consider using more sophisticated linking words to enhance the flow, such as 'Furthermore,' or 'Moreover'.

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Vocabulary is adequate and mostly accurate. Words like 'positive impact' and 'difficult tasks' are well-chosen. However, more precise and sophisticated vocabulary could elevate the response. For example, instead of 'difficult tasks,' consider using 'formidable challenges' or 'arduous endeavors'.

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Grammar is mostly accurate, with only minor errors. The sentence 'As well as when they complete any difficult tasks on their life...' is slightly awkward. Improving sentence structure and using a wider range of grammatical structures (e.g., passive voice, more complex sentence constructions) would improve the score.

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