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Band 7+: What are the things that make people feel proud of?

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Well, in my point of view, people can feel proud for many things. First of all, when people achieve something difficult that very few can achieve, they might feel happy. In addition to this, when someone overcomes challenges like depression and a tough job, they might feel happy. Apart from this, when someone learns a new skill, they feel happy. For example, right now I am preparing for an examination called ILC. If I get 7.5 in this examination, I will be very happy and I will be very proud of myself. So I think different people feel proud of different things.

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Well, in my point of view, people can be felt proud for many things. First of all, when people achieve something difficult that very few people can achieve, he or she might be felt happy. In addition to this, when someone overcome challenges like depression and tough job, they might be felt happy. Apart from this, when someone learn new skill, they feel happy. For example, right now I am preparing for an examination called ILC. If I get 7.5 in this examination, I will be very happy and I will be very proud of myself. So I think different people feel proud for different things.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
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Vocabulary Repetition:

feel: 5

happy: 4

people: 3

proud: 3

when: 3

very: 3

they: 3

this: 3

things: 2

achieve: 2

might: 2

someone: 2

examination: 2

different: 2

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Pronunciation

Your pronunciation is very good. Aim to refine subtleties and intonation to further improve.

Task Response

The answer is well-organized and coherent, covering multiple aspects of what makes people feel proud. However, the response occasionally drifts towards personal experiences, particularly the example of the ILC examination. Focusing more on general observations and broadening the scope of examples would enhance the response.

Fluency & Coherence

The answer is well-structured and coherent. There is a slight hesitancy and repetition ("felt happy"), but overall the flow is smooth and easy to follow. Minor improvements in phrasing would elevate the fluency.

Lexical Resource

6.5

The vocabulary is adequate and mostly accurate. Words like "overcome challenges" and "new skill" show good range. More precise language could be used in places; for example, instead of 'felt happy' repeatedly, consider synonyms like 'proud', 'satisfied', or 'accomplished'. Pay attention to vocabulary repetition to improve the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

There are a few grammatical errors, primarily in subject-verb agreement ("he or she might be felt happy"). The sentence structure is generally simple but effective. More complex grammatical structures and consistent accuracy would improve the score. Consider reviewing subject-verb agreement rules.

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