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Band 6+: What can today's children do to become famous?

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Today's children are able to become famous. They start by vlogging on Instagram or TikTok. They create interesting videos or daily routines, and in this way, they follow the most popular bloggers and become famous on Instagram or TikTok. After that, they start their own careers or purposes, and they also gain followers in this way. Children can become vloggers or TikTokers, along with other kinds of creators.

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Today’s children are two become famous. They started in the vlog in Instagram or TikTok. They do some videos and interesting or daily rotten and this way as they followed others most popular bloggers and they become famous in Instagram or TikTok. After that they started their own career or purpose and and them also followed followers in this way. Children’s maybe started to be vlogger or TikToker and some others kind

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they: 5

become: 3

children: 2

famous: 2

start: 2

instagram: 2

tiktok: 2

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Pronunciation

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Task Response

The answer is relevant to the question and provides some ideas. However, it is quite repetitive and lacks depth and detail. Consider exploring a wider range of avenues to fame beyond social media, and provide more specific examples to illustrate your points. Developing more sophisticated vocabulary and sentence structures would also enhance the response.

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The answer is understandable, but there are some fluency issues. The speaker uses fillers like "and" repeatedly and stumbles over their words at times. Improving sentence structure and reducing filler words would significantly enhance fluency. A more structured approach to outlining the path to fame would also help.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate but not particularly sophisticated. The speaker uses words like "vlog" and "TikToker" appropriately, but more precise and varied vocabulary would improve the score. Consider using synonyms and more descriptive language to enhance the lexical resource.

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There are several grammatical errors, including incorrect verb tenses and sentence structures. For example, "They started in the vlog" is grammatically incorrect. The speaker also uses run-on sentences. Focusing on accurate grammar and sentence structure is crucial for improvement. Practice using a wider range of grammatical structures.

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