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Band 7+: What can you see if you look out of your bedroom?

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I can't see much except for other buildings. We live in a community and there are like 10 or 12 high rises next to each other. But just outside the living room we have a balcony and from that side of the building we overlook the main river and the mountains that surround Fuzhou. At night the banks of the river light up. Also there are still a lot of buildings in the way, but the view is pretty nice.

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I can’t see much except for other buildings. We live in a community and there are like 10 or 12 high rises next to each other. But just outside the living room we have a balcony and from that side of the building we overlook the main river and the mountains that surround Fuzhu. At night the banks of the river light up. Also there are still a lot of buildings in the way the view is pretty nice.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
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Vocabulary Repetition:

other: 2

buildings: 2

there: 2

river: 2

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Pronunciation

Your pronunciation is quite good. Working on consistency and tackling difficult sounds may enhance clarity.

Task Response

The answer is relevant and provides a detailed description of the view from the bedroom, including the buildings and the balcony view. However, the response slightly deviates by focusing more on the living room view rather than strictly the bedroom view. To improve, ensure the description remains centered on the bedroom perspective throughout.

Fluency & Coherence

The answer is generally coherent and easy to follow, with a clear description of the view from the bedroom and a contrast with the living room balcony. However, there is some hesitation and a slight lack of logical connection between sentences, such as 'Also there are still a lot of buildings in the way the view is pretty nice' which could be smoother. To improve, use more cohesive devices like 'although' or 'despite' to link contrasting ideas, and practice speaking without pauses.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate and includes some good descriptive phrases like 'overlook the main river' and 'the banks of the river light up'. However, there is repetition of 'buildings' and 'view', and the phrase 'like 10 or 12 high rises' is a bit informal. To enhance lexical resource, use more varied and precise vocabulary, such as 'skyscrapers', 'residential towers', 'panorama', or 'illuminate' instead of 'light up'. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The grammar is mostly accurate with a mix of simple and complex structures, such as 'We live in a community and there are like 10 or 12 high rises' and 'from that side of the building we overlook the main river'. However, there is a minor error in the last sentence: 'Also there are still a lot of buildings in the way the view is pretty nice' should be '...in the way, but the view is pretty nice' or '...in the way, yet the view is pretty nice'. To improve, practice using more complex sentences with subordinate clauses and ensure correct punctuation and conjunctions.

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