Band 6+: What did you usually do on your birthday when you were a child? How do you normally celebrate your birthday now?

Your pronunciation is above average. However, you may find complexity in certain words challenging. Regular practice should aid in improvement.

The answer is relevant to the question and provides some information about the speaker's childhood birthdays and current celebrations. However, more detail and elaboration would improve the response. Consider expanding on the types of restaurants, the atmosphere, who you celebrated with, and specific activities or traditions. For the present day, describing your current birthday celebrations in more detail would strengthen the answer.

The answer is understandable, but the structure could be improved. The two parts of the question are addressed, but the transitions could be smoother. There is some repetition and slightly hesitant delivery implied by the raw answer. More sophisticated linking words and phrases would improve coherence.

The vocabulary is adequate but not particularly sophisticated. Words like "celebrate" are used repeatedly. More precise and varied vocabulary would enhance the response. For example, instead of 'somebody celebrate their birthday,' a more descriptive phrase could be used, such as 'people often gather to celebrate birthdays'.

There are some grammatical errors, particularly in the second sentence. The phrase "We went to a restaurant that I really liked to eat" is grammatically incorrect. The tense is inconsistent. More attention to subject-verb agreement and correct tense usage is needed. The sentence 'Normally, somebody celebrate their birthday or notice is at the restaurant too' is quite confusing and grammatically flawed.