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Band 4+: What do you think are the advantages of rewarding schoolchildren for good work?

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If the kids want a medal, a trophy, or a certificate, they can utilize this certificate in the future. For instance, the kids must follow job requirements or apply, using this certificate to add value to their applications.

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if the kids want and reward a medal or a lots of body or certificate the kids can utilize this certificate for next future for instance like the kids must to following requirement of job or apply and using this certificate for adding this value

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The answer is partially relevant to the question but lacks depth and breadth. It focuses narrowly on a single potential advantage (future job applications) and doesn't explore other benefits of rewarding schoolchildren for good work, such as increased motivation, improved learning habits, or a positive classroom environment. Consider expanding on the various ways rewards can positively impact students' academic and personal development. The response could be expanded as it currently feels quite brief.

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The vocabulary is adequate but not particularly sophisticated. The phrasing is sometimes awkward. Try to use more precise and varied vocabulary to express your ideas more effectively. For example, instead of 'lots of body,' consider 'a trophy' or 'an award'.

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