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Band 6+: What do you think are the advantages of rewarding schoolchildren for good work?

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Ishwilyamka, schoolchildren receive many prizes for their performances. Some of them are awarded certificates for the academic work they complete. Medals and trophies are also given to students who have outstanding performances in sports and other extracurricular activities. In some schools, they distribute books and other school items as rewards to improve the students' attitudes towards academic sessions and excellence.

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ーIshwilyamka, school children receive many prizes on behalf of their performances. Some of them are school students receive certificates for the academic work that they carry out. And also medals and trophies are given for the students who have outstanding performances on sports and other extracurricular activities. In some schools, they distribute books and other school items as a reward to improve the students’ attitudes on the academic sessions and excellence.

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academic: 2

other: 2

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Pronunciation

6.5

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Task Response

The answer is relevant to the question and provides some examples of rewards. However, it mainly focuses on describing the types of rewards rather than discussing the advantages of rewarding schoolchildren. To improve, consider explicitly stating and elaborating on the benefits, such as increased motivation, improved academic performance, and the development of positive learning habits.

Fluency & Coherence

The answer is coherent and mostly fluent. There is a slight stumble at the beginning ("Ishwilyamka"), which seems like a filler word or a slip of the tongue. Otherwise, the ideas flow logically. Minor improvements in phrasing would enhance fluency.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate and mostly accurate. Words like "outstanding performances" and "extracurricular activities" show a good range. However, more precise and sophisticated vocabulary could be used to elevate the response. For example, instead of 'distribute books,' consider 'provide books as incentives'.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

Grammar is mostly accurate, but there are a few minor errors. The sentence structure is sometimes a bit awkward. For example, "Some of them are school students receive certificates..." is grammatically incorrect. Focusing on more complex sentence structures and ensuring subject-verb agreement will improve this aspect.

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