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Band 6+: What do you think of the view that beauty products should not be advertise to children?

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Well, in my perspective, I agree with that view because many children now know about beauty products and want to buy them. Using these products is not good for their skin at that age. So, I think we shouldn't advertise beauty products to children to protect their skin.

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Well, in my perspective, I agree with that build because you know that now there are many children have known about the beauty products and they want to buy it. And you use it and it’s not good for their skin in that age. So I think we shouldn’t advertise that beauty products to children to protect them from the skin.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
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Vocabulary Repetition:

products: 3

children: 2

beauty: 2

their: 2

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Pronunciation

5.5

Your pronunciation is average. It is understandable but not always accurate. Focusing on the rhythm and stress patterns of English could prove beneficial.

Task Response

The answer is relevant to the question and provides a clear opinion. However, the reasoning could be more developed and nuanced. Consider exploring the potential impact of advertising on children's self-esteem and body image, and perhaps offering a broader perspective on the role of regulation in protecting children from inappropriate marketing.

Fluency & Coherence

The answer is coherent and mostly fluent, although there's some repetition and slightly hesitant phrasing. Improving the flow by removing unnecessary phrases like "you know" would enhance fluency. More sophisticated linking words could also improve coherence.

Lexical Resource

Vocabulary is adequate but not particularly sophisticated. More precise vocabulary choices could be used. For example, instead of 'not good for their skin,' a more precise term like 'harmful to their developing skin' could be used. A wider range of vocabulary would improve the score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

Grammar is mostly accurate, but there are some minor errors. The sentence 'many children have known about the beauty products' is grammatically incorrect. Improving grammatical accuracy and using more complex sentence structures would improve the score. Consider using a wider range of tenses.

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