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Band 6+: What do you think of the view that beauty products should not be advertise to children?

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I agree with this opinion because they don't need beauty products at this age. Rather, they need the care and attention of their parents in aspects of life, academics, culture, and relationships.

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I agree this opinion because they don’t need the beauty products in this age. Rather than they need to care and attention of their parents in front life aspects, academic and cultures and relationships.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B2 - Upper Intermediate
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Vocabulary Repetition:
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Task Response

5.5

The answer is relevant to the question and provides a clear opinion. However, it could be improved by elaborating on the potential negative impacts of advertising beauty products to children, such as the creation of unrealistic beauty standards and the promotion of consumerism. A broader discussion of the societal implications would strengthen the response. The response could be expanded as it currently feels quite brief.

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The answer is coherent and mostly fluent. Minor repetition and slight unnatural phrasing ('in front life aspects') could be improved for greater fluency. Consider pausing slightly more between ideas for better pacing.

Lexical Resource

Vocabulary is adequate and mostly accurate. More sophisticated vocabulary could be used to express the ideas more precisely. For example, instead of 'care and attention,' consider 'nurturing' or 'guidance.'

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

Grammar is mostly accurate, but there are some minor errors ('they don't need the beauty products in this age' should be 'they don't need beauty products at this age'). More complex grammatical structures could be incorporated to enhance the response.

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