Band 6+: What is the condition of the roads in your city like?

Your pronunciation is above average. However, you may find complexity in certain words challenging. Regular practice should aid in improvement.

The answer is relevant to the question and provides some information about the condition of the roads. However, it could be improved by providing more specific details and examples to support the claim that the roads are in bad condition. Elaborating on the types of problems with the roads (e.g., potholes, congestion) and the impact these have on daily life would strengthen the response.

The answer is understandable, but the structure could be improved. There's some rambling and repetition. Focus on a clearer structure: state the condition, give an example or two, and conclude concisely. Practice speaking more smoothly and avoid unnecessary phrases like "in essence, my birth."

Vocabulary is adequate but lacks precision. Instead of "very bad," consider more descriptive terms like "deplorable," "in disrepair," or "potholed." The phrase "a good road condition" is grammatically incorrect; try "deserves better road conditions" or "needs improved roads."

There are grammatical errors. "Our city also like a good road condition" is incorrect. The sentence structure is sometimes awkward. Practice using a wider range of grammatical structures, such as passive voice and more complex sentence constructions. Pay attention to subject-verb agreement.