Band 7+: What is your job

Your pronunciation is above average. However, you may find complexity in certain words challenging. Regular practice should aid in improvement.

The response is comprehensive and directly addresses the question. It provides a clear description of the job role and responsibilities, demonstrating strong communication skills.

The response is generally fluent, but there are some slight hesitations. The structure is clear, but could benefit from more cohesive devices to link ideas more smoothly. Try to avoid filler words like 'so' at the beginning of sentences.

The vocabulary is adequate for describing the job, but there's room for improvement. The phrase 'these loaches' is unclear and likely a misspoken word. Using more precise and varied vocabulary related to project management would enhance the response. For example, instead of 'very short data analysis skill,' consider 'strong analytical skills.'

The grammar is mostly accurate, but there are some minor errors. 'Intercommunication sometimes' could be improved to 'intercommunication skills' or 'strong communication skills'. Also, 'just kind of demand personally with detailed oriented skill' is grammatically awkward; consider rephrasing to 'a demand for personal detail-oriented skills' or 'a need for strong attention to detail'.