Band 7+: What is your job? Where do you work? Why did you choose that job? Is it a popular job in your country? Do you like your job? Do you get on well with your colleagues? What was your first day like? What responsibilities do you have at work? If you had the chance, would you change your job? Do you plan to continue with your job in the future?

Your pronunciation is very good. Aim to refine subtleties and intonation to further improve.

The response is well-structured and coherent, directly addressing all parts of the question. Consider expanding on your future business plans and the type of business you envision to further demonstrate your passion and ambition. Adding specific examples of your interest in business would strengthen your response.

The response is coherent and well-structured, showing a clear line of thought. The fluency is good, with only minor hesitations. To improve, consider adding more transitional words and phrases to enhance the flow of ideas. For example, you could add phrases like 'In addition,' 'Furthermore,' or 'Moreover' to connect your thoughts more smoothly.

The vocabulary used is appropriate and accurate, demonstrating a good range of words related to business and career aspirations. The language is precise and effective. To achieve a higher score, try incorporating more sophisticated vocabulary and idiomatic expressions relevant to the business world.

The grammar is largely accurate, with only a minor error ('business' instead of 'businesses'). The sentence structures are varied and complex, showing a good command of grammar. The response demonstrates a good range of grammatical structures. Maintaining this level of accuracy while incorporating more complex grammatical structures will help you achieve a higher score.