Band 6+: What kind of jobs do the people in your town/village do?

Your pronunciation is above average. However, you may find complexity in certain words challenging. Regular practice should aid in improvement.

The answer is relevant and sufficient. Consider expanding on the types of factory work or the specifics of farming practices to enrich the response.

The answer is coherent and easy to follow. However, there is some repetition and slight hesitation. Try to plan your response briefly before speaking to improve fluency. The phrase 'new symptom' seems out of place and needs to be removed or replaced with a relevant term like 'other crops'.

The vocabulary is adequate but could be more precise. Instead of 'labor work,' consider using more specific terms like 'factory worker,' 'agricultural worker,' or 'manual laborer.' The range of vocabulary is limited. Try to incorporate more sophisticated vocabulary related to occupations and agriculture.

The grammar is mostly accurate, with only a minor error ('new symptom'). The sentence structures are simple but effective. Try to incorporate more complex grammatical structures, such as relative clauses or passive voice, to demonstrate a wider range.