Band 6+: What kind of jobs do the people in your town/village do?

Your pronunciation is average. It is understandable but not always accurate. Focusing on the rhythm and stress patterns of English could prove beneficial.

The answer is relevant to the question and provides some information about job types in the city. However, it could benefit from more specific examples of jobs and a more detailed description of the job market. Consider providing specific job titles and elaborating on the industries present in the city.

The answer is coherent and well-structured. The slight repetition of "we are all present in this amazing city" could be avoided for improved fluency. Consider adding a specific example or two of jobs to make the response more detailed and engaging.

Good use of vocabulary, such as "blue-collar worker" and "white-collar worker." The language is precise and effective. Adding more specific job titles would further enhance lexical resource.

Grammar is mostly accurate. The sentence 'Since Washington City is the most developed city in Vietnam, it is included in various top jobs that you can find' could be improved for clarity and grammatical precision. Consider rephrasing to something like 'As Washington City is the most developed city in Vietnam, it offers a wide range of jobs.' Minor improvements in sentence structure would elevate the grammatical range.