Band 7+: What kind of people like reading and what kind of people don't like reading very much?

Your pronunciation is quite good. Working on consistency and tackling difficult sounds may enhance clarity.

The answer is well-organized and coherent, showing a good understanding of the question. Consider exploring a wider range of reasons why people may or may not enjoy reading, perhaps touching upon factors like reading habits, preferred learning styles, or access to books. Adding specific examples would further strengthen the response.

The answer is coherent and mostly fluent. There's a slight stumble towards the end, and the phrasing could be more concise. Try to avoid fillers like 'you know' and plan transitions between ideas more smoothly. For example, instead of 'Those who do not like to read are either to be with their life that they even can't remember the characters' names', a more concise and grammatically correct phrasing would be 'Those who dislike reading are often so engrossed in their own lives that they cannot recall character names'.

The vocabulary is adequate and mostly accurate. The term 'book nerds' is a bit informal for an IELTS exam; consider using a more neutral term like 'avid readers' or 'people who enjoy reading'. More precise vocabulary choices would enhance the response. For example, instead of 'interact with the story', you could use 'engage with the narrative'.

There are some grammatical inaccuracies, particularly in the final sentence. The sentence structure is sometimes awkward. Focus on improving sentence structure and grammatical accuracy. Practice using a wider range of grammatical structures, such as complex sentences and passive voice, to demonstrate a higher level of grammatical proficiency.