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Band 5+: What kinds of people are likely to be the role models for teenagers? Is it important for children to have a role model? Are there any differences between today's famous people and those of the past? What qualities do famous people have? What kinds of people are likely to become famous? Do people tend to choose the best people as their role model?

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Yes, it's very important for children to have a role model in their lives because they can follow them and easily succeed in this field. Yes, there are significant differences between today's famous people and those of the past. The younger generations can easily become famous through social media in this day and age.

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Yes, it’s very important for children to have a rule in their lives because they can follow them and they can easily success in this old field. There are, yes, there are very difference between today’s and famous people and those of the past. The indigenous generations, people can easily, famous by social media at this past time.

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The response is brief and only partially addresses the question. It needs to expand on the types of role models, the qualities of famous people, and the selection process of role models. A more in-depth discussion of the differences between past and present famous people would also improve the response.

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The answer is somewhat disjointed and lacks a clear structure. While the speaker attempts to address the question, the ideas are not smoothly connected. Improving the flow of ideas and using transition words would enhance coherence. The phrase 'this old field' is unclear and needs rephrasing.

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The vocabulary is basic and lacks precision. Words like 'rule' instead of 'role model' and 'easily success' show a limited range. More sophisticated vocabulary would improve the score. The phrase 'indigenous generations' seems out of place and needs clarification or removal.

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There are grammatical errors, such as 'rule' instead of 'role model' and the sentence structure is simple. More complex sentence structures and accurate grammar are needed. The answer shows some grammatical inaccuracies that hinder clarity. Focus on improving sentence structure and grammatical accuracy.

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