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Band 7+: What kinds of people become famous?

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Well, I believe that nowadays the majority of people appreciate the efforts of those who are dedicated and committed. For instance, there are scientists and innovators who are able to establish specific equipment and appliances for people. As a result, the majority of people can cover their basic needs and lead a well-balanced lifestyle. Therefore, such people are highly appreciated in our society for their dedication to our lifestyle. Moreover, I suppose nowadays there are people who tend to promote themselves by using social media platforms. For instance, this is a vital tool that encourages them to shoot recordings and deliver their points to society. Consequently, with its help, they can advance their careers and even set up a business.

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Well, I believe that nowadays the majority of people appreciate the efforts of those who are dedicated and committed. For instance, there are scientists and innovators who are able to establish specific equipment and appliances for people. As a result, the majority of people are able to cover their basic needs and lead a well-balanced lifestyle. Therefore, such people are highly appreciated in our society for their dedication towards our lifestyle. Moreover, I suppose nowadays there are people who tend to promote themselves by using social media platforms. For instance, this is a vital tool which encourages them to shoot recordings and deliver their points to society. Consequently, with the help of it, they are able to advance their careers and even set up a business.

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Vocabulary Repetition:

people: 5

their: 4

nowadays: 2

majority: 2

instance: 2

there: 2

lifestyle: 2

society: 2

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Task Response

The response addresses the question but lacks depth and sufficient examples. The ideas are somewhat general and could benefit from more specific illustrations to strengthen the points made. Consider expanding on the examples provided to demonstrate a clearer understanding.

Fluency & Coherence

The answer is well-organized and coherent, with clear examples and logical flow. The use of cohesive devices like 'for instance,' 'as a result,' 'therefore,' 'moreover,' and 'consequently' enhances the structure. However, avoid overusing 'the majority of people' as it can sound repetitive. Try to vary your sentence structures and use synonyms to maintain a high level of fluency.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is varied and appropriate, including terms like 'dedicated,' 'committed,' 'innovators,' 'establish,' 'appliances,' 'well-balanced lifestyle,' 'promote themselves,' 'social media platforms,' and 'advance their careers.' To further enhance your lexical resource, consider using more idiomatic expressions or less common vocabulary related to fame and achievement.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The grammatical range and accuracy are excellent. The answer demonstrates a strong command of grammar with a variety of sentence structures used naturally and appropriately. Minor corrections in the refined answer ('are able to cover' to 'can cover,' 'their dedication towards our lifestyle' to 'their dedication to our lifestyle,' 'which encourages them' to 'that encourages them,' 'with the help of it' to 'with its help') enhance the overall accuracy, but the original answer is already very strong.

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