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Band 5+: What should parents do if their children don't want to study?

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I think first all parents should try to understand their children because they may not want to attend their lessons or do their work. Maybe it's boring or too hard. The parent can help their children find ways to make their lessons easier and encourage them. Fascinating their students in prior sessions can help them take everything easily. This way, students can improve their understanding and solve problems more easily.

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I think first all parents should try to hurt children because why they don’t, why they don’t he attend his lesson or his work. Maybe it’s boring or it’s too much hard, the parent can help their children how to easy her lessons and encourages. Fascinate in his prior session her student everything taken easy. So the student easily improve her brain and everything taken easily solve them solve this.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B2 - Upper Intermediate
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Vocabulary Repetition:

their: 7

children: 2

lessons: 2

students: 2

easily: 2

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Pronunciation

5.5

Your pronunciation is average. It is understandable but not always accurate. Focusing on the rhythm and stress patterns of English could prove beneficial.

Task Response

The answer is relevant to the question and provides some useful suggestions. However, expanding on the suggestions with more specific examples and exploring a wider range of potential reasons for children's reluctance to study would strengthen the response.

Fluency & Coherence

The answer is understandable, but the delivery is somewhat disjointed. There's a lack of smooth transitions between ideas. Work on connecting your thoughts more logically and using cohesive devices (e.g., 'however,' 'therefore,' 'in addition'). Reduce repetition and self-correction.

Lexical Resource

Vocabulary is adequate but lacks precision in places. Phrases like "taken easy" are not quite idiomatic. Expand your vocabulary with more sophisticated synonyms and collocations to express your ideas more effectively. Consider using more precise verbs and nouns.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

Grammar contains several errors, particularly in subject-verb agreement and tense consistency. The sentence structure is often simplistic. Focus on improving accuracy and expanding your range of grammatical structures. Pay close attention to subject-verb agreement and use a variety of sentence structures to enhance fluency.

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