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Band 5+: What should parents do if their children don't want to study?

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Well, in my personal opinion, if children don't desire to study, parents have to give some useful ideas and advice about the future. For example, if children don't study now, what will happen in the future, like children will have some money issues. Therefore, I assume that advice is a great way to ignite children's love for reading.

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Um, well, in my personal opinion, um, children. If children don’t desire to study, parents have to give some useful ideas, uh, advices about future time. Such as if children, um, don’t study now, uh, what happened, uh, in the future, like, um, the children have. Children will have, uh, some, um, money issues. Um, therefore, I assume that the advice is great way, um, ignite children’great. Um, way to, uh, ignite the love for reading to children.

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The answer is relevant to the question and provides some suggestions. However, it focuses heavily on financial aspects and lacks a broader perspective on the issue. Consider exploring other motivational strategies and addressing potential underlying reasons for the child's reluctance to study. A more comprehensive approach would strengthen the response.

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