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Band 7+: Is it good to reward children too often? Why?

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From my perspective, this trend has both advantages and disadvantages. Starting with the positives, it's really important for children to be inspired by giving them presents and gifts for their efforts, as it motivates them to act better. On the other hand, giving too many gifts can create an expectation that after completing certain tasks, they will definitely be rewarded with something. If this does not happen, they may not be motivated to do anything according to their desires.

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From my perspective, this trend has both advantages and disadvantages. Starting with plus, actually it’s really important for children to inspire them by giving some presents and gifts for their effort as it leaves them to be even motivated and act better. On the other hand, giving too much gift can give them hope for the future that after completing some terms they would definitely be avoided by something. So if it’s not, they will not do anything according to their desire.

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The response addresses the prompt directly and provides a balanced perspective by discussing both the advantages and disadvantages of rewarding children too often. The ideas are relevant and generally well-explained. To improve, consider expanding on the potential long-term effects of over-rewarding or not rewarding children, and providing more specific examples to support your points.

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The vocabulary is adequate but could be more precise. Phrases like 'giving some presents and gifts' could be more concise. Try to use a wider range of vocabulary to express your ideas more accurately. For example, instead of 'act better,' you could say 'behave more responsibly' or 'perform better.'

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The grammar is mostly accurate, but there are some errors that affect clarity. For example, 'it leaves them to be even motivated' is not grammatically correct. Also, 'they would definitely be avoided by something' should be 'they would definitely be rewarded with something'. Focus on using a wider range of grammatical structures and ensuring accuracy in sentence construction.

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