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Band 7+: Is it good to reward children too often? Why?

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I think it really depends on the age and children's activities. However, it is better to encourage children for their achievements than to not say pleasant words. I think children feel better when they know you take pride in them.

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I think it really depends on the age and children’s activities. However, it is better to encourage children for their achievement then don’t tell pleasant words. I think children feel better when they feel you take pride in them.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
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children: 2

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Pronunciation

Your pronunciation is quite good. Working on consistency and tackling difficult sounds may enhance clarity.

Task Response

The response addresses the question but could benefit from further elaboration and specific examples to strengthen the argument. Consider exploring the potential drawbacks of frequent rewards and how they might affect a child's intrinsic motivation.

Fluency & Coherence

The answer is generally coherent, but could benefit from more complex connectors to link ideas more smoothly. For example, you could add phrases like 'In addition' or 'Furthermore' to expand on your points.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate, but could be more precise. Consider using synonyms to enhance your response. For example, instead of 'pleasant words,' you could say 'words of affirmation' or 'positive reinforcement.'

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

There are minor grammatical errors, such as 'then don't tell pleasant words' which should be 'than to not say pleasant words'. Focus on using correct prepositions and verb tenses. Also, ensure subject-verb agreement.

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