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Band 6+: What sorts of impact can large holiday resorts had on the environment?

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Definitely yes, especially in my country. There are a lot of holiday hotels that have a negative impact on the environment. For instance, they harm the trees, and while they do some reforestation, it harms our bread quality. It also causes some social problems. People are arguing on Twitter about this harm. They believe that governments are blind to these problems and only care about the profit they make.

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Definitely yes, especially in my country. There are a lot of holiday hotels have a negative affect on the environment. For instance, they harm the trees and they do some reforestation to the nature and it harms our Bread quality. Also it causes some social problems. People are arguing in Twitter about these harming. They believe that governments are blind about these problems and they only care about the profit that they make.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
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Pronunciation

Your pronunciation is above average. However, you may find complexity in certain words challenging. Regular practice should aid in improvement.

Task Response

The response addresses the question but could benefit from more specific examples and a broader perspective. Expanding on the types of environmental impacts and providing a more balanced view would strengthen the answer.

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The answer is generally coherent and easy to follow. The use of 'for instance' is appropriate. However, there are some pauses and hesitations that slightly affect the fluency. To improve, try to elaborate more on each point and use a wider range of cohesive devices to link your ideas together more smoothly.

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The vocabulary is adequate but could be more precise and varied. The phrase 'harm our bread quality' is unclear and likely a misstatement. To improve, focus on using more specific vocabulary related to environmental impact and social issues. For example, instead of 'harm the trees,' you could say 'contribute to deforestation.'

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

There are several grammatical errors, such as 'holiday hotels have a negative affect' (should be 'impact') and 'reforestation to the nature' (should be 'reforestation of the area'). The sentence structure is relatively simple. To improve, focus on using a wider range of grammatical structures and ensuring accuracy in your sentence construction. Pay attention to common errors like subject-verb agreement and correct preposition usage.

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