Band 5+: what type of noise do you come across in your daily life

Your pronunciation is above average. However, you may find complexity in certain words challenging. Regular practice should aid in improvement.

The response addresses the question by listing various types of noise; however, it relies heavily on personal experience ('In my hometown', 'In my busy mood') rather than discussing the topic in a general or societal context. To improve, try to move away from 'I' and 'my' and instead use general subjects such as 'people,' 'urban dwellers,' or 'society.' For example, instead of saying 'I hear noise from vehicles,' you could say, 'In most urban areas, traffic noise is a common occurrence.' Additionally, ensure the response is fully developed; the answer ends abruptly, which prevents a complete exploration of the topic.

The answer is quite brief and ends abruptly, which prevents it from being a complete response. While you address the question, you lack the development required for Part 3, which demands extended discourse. To improve, use more cohesive devices (e.g., 'Furthermore,' 'On the other hand,' 'In contrast to my city life...') and try to expand on *why* these noises occur or how they impact you more deeply.

The vocabulary used is very basic (e.g., 'noise', 'hear', 'busy mood'). In Part 3, examiners look for less common lexical items. Instead of 'noise', you could use 'commotion', 'din', 'cacophony', or 'ambient sounds'. Instead of 'busy mood', you could say 'during hectic periods' or 'when I am under significant pressure'.

The grammar is mostly accurate but very simple, consisting primarily of basic S-V-O structures. There is a lack of complex sentence structures (subordinate clauses, conditional sentences, or perfect tenses). For example, instead of 'I hear the most of the noises...', you could say, 'The most prevalent type of noise I encounter is the constant roar of traffic...'. Also, note that 'noise' is often uncountable in this context; 'the noises' sounds slightly unnatural here.