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Band 6+: What was the dream job when you were young?

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To be honest, when I was young, I wanted to be a doctor because I wanted to be like my dad, who is the best doctor in Pakistan. I was also interested in medicine as a kid, and when I heard the word 'doctor,' it sounded interesting and gripping to me. I think it was a dream, and I just enjoyed it and dreamed about it.

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To be honest, when I was young I wanted to be nervous or early because firstly I wanted to be like my dad because my dad is the best nervous disorder in Pakistan and of course I was interested in medicine when I was kid and when I hear the word doctor it sounds interesting and gripping for me. And I think it was a dream and I just enjoy and I just dreamt.

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doctor: 2

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