Band 6+: What was your dream when you were a child

Your pronunciation is above average. However, you may find complexity in certain words challenging. Regular practice should aid in improvement.

The answer is well-organized and coherent, showing a clear progression of the speaker's childhood dreams. Consider adding more details to enrich the narrative and provide a more vivid picture of your experiences and motivations. Elaborating on the impact of the injury and the transition to your new dream would strengthen the response.

The answer is coherent and mostly fluent. There's a slight stumble in the middle ('but then I went to the football club, I played a month...'), which could be improved with smoother transitions. Consider pausing briefly before starting a new thought to enhance fluency.

Vocabulary is adequate but could be more precise. Phrases like "a lot of things" and "big business man" are a bit general. Using more specific vocabulary would elevate the response. For example, instead of "big business man", consider "successful entrepreneur" or "leading industrialist" depending on the nuance you want to convey. The phrase "produce a lot of things for local people" could be replaced with something more precise, such as "manufacture goods to meet local needs" or "provide essential services to the community".

Grammar is mostly accurate, with only minor errors. The sentence structure is sometimes a bit simple. Using more complex sentence structures, such as subordinate clauses, would improve grammatical range. For example, instead of two short sentences, "I watched many games on TV and spent half my time watching football games." Consider combining them into one more sophisticated sentence, such as "I was an avid viewer of football matches, spending half my time watching games on TV." The phrase "to have to be" is slightly awkward and could be simplified to "to become".