Band 5+: What was your dream when you were a child

Your pronunciation is average. It is understandable but not always accurate. Focusing on the rhythm and stress patterns of English could prove beneficial.

The response addresses the prompt but lacks clarity and coherence. It jumps between different ideas without a clear connection. Try to organize your thoughts and present them in a more structured way. Focus on one aspect of your childhood dream and elaborate on it with relevant details and examples. Ensure that your response directly answers the question and maintains a consistent theme throughout.

The answer is mostly coherent, but the connection between wanting to be a doctor, an economist, and a math student isn't entirely clear. Try to create smoother transitions between ideas. For example, you could explain how your interest shifted from medicine to economics, and then to math.

The vocabulary is adequate but could be more sophisticated. Instead of saying "great job," consider using terms like "noble profession" or "rewarding career." Also, "chosen a job as an economist" is slightly unnatural. Rephrasing to "pursuing a career as an economist" or "studying to become an economist" would be better. Instead of "previous one", use "earlier dream" or "initial ambition".

There are some grammatical inaccuracies, such as 'my major is the economy' which should be 'my major is economics'. Also, the phrase 'I'm trying to learn math and English subjects hard' could be improved to 'I'm studying math and English diligently.' Pay attention to articles and prepositions. Ensure tenses are used correctly and consistently.