Band 6+: Who are you going to become in the future?

Your pronunciation is above average. However, you may find complexity in certain words challenging. Regular practice should aid in improvement.

The answer is quite good and well-organized. Consider adding more details about your plans to achieve your goal of becoming a lawyer, or perhaps discussing specific areas of law that interest you. Elaborating on the types of crimes you'd like to address would also strengthen your response.

The answer is coherent and mostly fluent. There's a slight stumble with the phrase "manifold CVS," which is unclear. The overall message is understandable, but smoother transitions between ideas would improve fluency. Consider using more sophisticated linking words like 'furthermore,' 'in addition,' or 'moreover'.

The vocabulary is adequate but not highly sophisticated. The repeated use of "manifold" is slightly awkward. While the meaning is clear, more precise and varied vocabulary would enhance the response. Consider synonyms for 'crimes' and 'protect' to demonstrate a wider range.

Grammar is mostly accurate, with a few minor errors. The phrase "I have a propose" should be "I have a purpose." The sentence structure is generally simple. Using more complex sentence structures and varied grammatical forms would improve the score. For example, instead of repeating 'I' at the beginning of multiple sentences, try combining some sentences for better flow.