Band 5+: Who are you going to become in the future?

Your pronunciation is average. It is understandable but not always accurate. Focusing on the rhythm and stress patterns of English could prove beneficial.

The response is understandable and addresses the question. However, it lacks depth and specific examples to support the choice of becoming a businesswoman. Elaborating on the reasons, perhaps by discussing specific skills or interests, would strengthen the response.

The answer is coherent, but there is some repetition and slightly unnatural phrasing. The student could improve fluency by avoiding repetition and using more concise language. For example, instead of saying "businesswoman is very useful for me and this job is both wonderful and suitable for people," they could say "being a businesswoman is useful, rewarding, and a good fit for me."

The vocabulary is adequate but lacks precision and range. The phrase "a majority of suitable" is awkward and imprecise. More sophisticated vocabulary choices would improve the score. Consider using synonyms for "wonderful" and "suitable" to demonstrate a wider range of vocabulary.

There are grammatical errors, such as the repetition of "businesswoman" and the awkward phrasing of "a majority of suitable." The student needs to improve their grammatical accuracy and range by using more complex sentence structures and avoiding repetition. The sentence "Which is why many people want to be a businesswoman or a businesswoman in the future" is grammatically incorrect and demonstrates a lack of range.