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Band 7+: Who is best at advertising young people about choosing a job teachers or parents?

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From my point of view, both of them are vital for students. On the one hand, parents, who know more about their children's preferences, personalities, and even their talents, can give great advice. On the other hand, teachers have knowledge from their interactions with students over the years and from diverse fields. Therefore, their knowledge is totally different from that of parents. Thank you.

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From my point of view, both of them are vital among students. On the one hand, with parents, those who know more about children’s preference, personalities, and even their talent would give grace advice. On the other hand, with teachers, we have ways of knowledge from both from interactions with students over years, and from diverse fields. Therefore, their knowledge was totally different with parents. Thank you.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
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Vocabulary Repetition:

from: 4

their: 4

students: 2

parents: 2

knowledge: 2

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Pronunciation

Your pronunciation is above average. However, you may find complexity in certain words challenging. Regular practice should aid in improvement.

Task Response

The answer is well-organized and presents a balanced perspective on the roles of parents and teachers in guiding young people's career choices. Consider expanding on the specific ways teachers and parents can contribute to this process, providing more concrete examples to illustrate your points. A concluding statement summarizing your overall assessment would strengthen the response.

Fluency & Coherence

The answer is well-structured and coherent, with a clear comparison between parents and teachers. Minor repetition of 'on the one hand' and 'on the other hand' could be avoided for better flow. The conclusion is abrupt; a brief summary sentence would improve coherence.

Lexical Resource

Vocabulary is adequate and mostly accurate. Words like 'vital,' 'preferences,' and 'diverse fields' show good range. However, 'grace advice' is slightly inaccurate; 'great advice' would be better. More precise vocabulary could elevate the response.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

Grammar is mostly accurate, with only minor errors ('with parents' should be 'from parents' in the second part). Sentence structures are varied, but some could be improved for greater complexity and precision. The use of 'was' instead of 'is' in the final sentence is a minor grammatical error.

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