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Band 6+: Why are there more noises made at home now than in the past

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Well, I believe that there are more noises at home compared to the past. It's because people are struggling in society. Recently, social pressure has become a more significant issue. For example, an employee under pressure to complete his or her tasks by the deadline could experience a lot of stress, affecting both physical and mental health. So all the conditions related to social pressure could lead to negative attitudes that are revealed at home. Thank you.

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Well, I believe that there are more noises compared with the past at home. It’s because people are struggling in the society. In recent, social pressure is getting more significant issues. For example, an employee or under pressure to complete he or she’s mission with the deadline, could lead a lot of pressure and cause physical and mental health at the same time. So all the conditional about the social pressure could lead negative attitude to reveals at home. Thank you.

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Vocabulary Repetition:

pressure: 3

social: 2

could: 2

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Pronunciation

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Task Response

The response does not directly address the question of why there are more noises at home now than in the past. Instead, it discusses social pressure and its effects on individuals, which is not directly relevant to the question. To improve, focus on providing reasons related to changes in home environments, technology, or lifestyles that contribute to increased noise levels.

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The answer is generally coherent, but there are some pauses and hesitations that affect the flow. The ideas are connected, but the organization could be improved for better clarity. Try to use more signposting language to guide the listener through your argument. For example, using phrases like 'Firstly,' 'Secondly,' or 'In addition' can help structure your response.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate but lacks precision and variety. Words like 'struggling,' 'pressure,' and 'significant' are used, but the range could be expanded. Try to incorporate more specific and nuanced vocabulary related to stress, societal pressures, and their effects on home life. For example, instead of 'struggling,' you could use 'contending with' or 'grappling with.'

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

There are noticeable grammatical errors, such as incorrect verb tenses ('lead a lot of pressure' should be 'lead to a lot of pressure') and pronoun usage ('he or she's mission' should be 'his or her tasks'). The range of grammatical structures is limited. Focus on improving accuracy in basic grammar and try to incorporate more complex sentence structures where appropriate. For example, use conditional sentences or relative clauses to add complexity.

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