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Band 7+: why do people need to travel every day?

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I think there are so many possible reasons, one notable one being the characteristics of their job. For example, if someone works as a contractor, they have to travel to many businesses far from their home to sign and deal with contracts. The same applies to scouts in sports. There are scouts who go to different places in the world to look for talent, and they have to search in many countries to find potential players to bring to their youth academy. That's why they have to go to a lot of places. I think that is one notable reason for people to travel every day.

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I think there are so many possible reasons, one notable of which is the characteristics of their job. For example, if one works as a contractor, they have to travel to many other businesses in far proximity from their home to sign and deal contracts and the same applies for scouts like in sports. There are scouts who go to different places in the world to look for talents and you know they have to search in many countries to find out potential players to bring them to their young academy and that’s why they have to go to a lot of places so I think that is a one notable reason for people to travel every day.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
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Vocabulary Repetition:

many: 3

their: 3

they: 3

have: 3

think: 2

there: 2

notable: 2

travel: 2

scouts: 2

places: 2

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Pronunciation

7.5

Your pronunciation is quite good. Working on consistency and tackling difficult sounds may enhance clarity.

Task Response

The answer is well-organized and provides relevant examples. Consider expanding on the range of reasons beyond employment, perhaps touching upon education or social commitments. More varied examples would further strengthen the response.

Fluency & Coherence

The answer is coherent and well-structured. There is a slight hesitation and repetition ('to a lot of places'), but overall the flow is smooth and natural. Consider using more sophisticated linking words to enhance the flow even further (e.g., 'Furthermore,' 'Moreover,' 'In addition').

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate and appropriate for the task. Words like 'contractor,' 'proximity,' and 'potential' demonstrate a good range. However, more precise and sophisticated vocabulary could be used to elevate the response. For example, instead of 'deal contracts,' consider 'negotiate contracts' or 'finalize contracts'.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

Grammar is mostly accurate, with only minor slips. The sentence structure is generally varied, but some sentences are a bit long and could be broken down for clarity. The use of conditional sentences ('if someone works as a contractor...') is good. Focus on improving the precision of grammatical structures to achieve a higher score.

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