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Band 7+: why do people need to travel every day?

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First of all, I find it's one of the most stressful activities for each person. Traveling helps a person escape from a boring and monotonous life. Another argument is that it promotes better health and broader knowledge. During the trip, the brain becomes more active, and the ability to absorb information improves.

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First of all, I find it’s one of the most stressful activities for each person. Traveling helps a person escape from a boring and monotonous life. Another argument is that health care and broader knowledge. During the trip, the brain becomes more active and the ability to absorb information improves.

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Pronunciation

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Task Response

The answer is relevant to the question and provides some reasons why people travel. However, it focuses more on the benefits of traveling rather than directly addressing why people need to travel every day. Consider expanding on the necessity of daily travel for work, education, or other essential activities. More specific examples would strengthen the response.

Fluency & Coherence

The answer is coherent, but the initial statement contradicts the rest of the response. It would be better to start by stating the positive aspects of travel and then address the stress aspect as a potential drawback that can be overcome.

Lexical Resource

Vocabulary is adequate, but some words could be more precise. Instead of 'broader knowledge,' consider 'enhanced learning' or 'intellectual stimulation.' 'Absorb information' is acceptable but could be replaced with a more sophisticated phrase like 'cognitive enhancement' or 'increased information retention'.

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Grammar is mostly correct, but there are minor issues. The sentence 'Another argument is that health care and broader knowledge' is grammatically incorrect and needs restructuring. The phrasing could be improved for greater clarity and precision.

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