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Band 6+: why do some people buy lots of things for their home?

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To be honest, I have never thought about that, but I believe that individuals buy lots of things for their home because they want to decorate their house to feel more comfortable. For example, when their friends come to their home, they may feel happier or wish for it when they see this vibe.

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To be honest, I have never thought about that, but I believe that individuals buy lots of things for their home because they want to decorate their house to feel more comfortable there. and for example when their friends will come to their home they will be maybe more happy or wishing it when they see this wipe

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Your pronunciation is above average. However, you may find complexity in certain words challenging. Regular practice should aid in improvement.

Task Response

The response addresses the question directly and provides a relevant explanation. To further enhance the answer, consider exploring additional reasons for purchasing home items, such as status, investment, or cultural factors. Providing a wider range of perspectives can demonstrate a more comprehensive understanding.

Fluency & Coherence

The response is somewhat coherent, but there are some hesitations and a lack of smooth flow. The use of 'and' to connect ideas is a bit repetitive. Try to use a wider range of cohesive devices to link your ideas more effectively. For example, use 'furthermore,' 'moreover,' or 'in addition' to add more information.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is relatively simple and lacks precision. The word 'vibe' is used, but the context is not entirely clear. Try to use more specific and descriptive words to convey your ideas more accurately. For example, instead of 'things,' you could say 'decorative items' or 'home furnishings.'

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There are some grammatical errors, such as 'when their friends will come to their home' and 'wishing it when they see this wipe.' These errors affect the clarity of the response. Focus on using correct verb tenses and sentence structures. For example, 'when their friends come to their home' is more accurate.

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