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Band 4+: Why do some people not care that their behavior disturbs people around them?

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I'm here to talk about why some people do not care that their behavior disturbs those around them. This situation is very common, as people are everywhere, for example, in parks and so on. I think this behavior is linked to a busy lifestyle. I often wonder about this and question why some individuals seem unaware of how their actions affect others.

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I’m brought to you speaking a lot of people, not to care that their behavior distorts people around them because this position is very obesity of people and all the people got everywhere for example park and so on so I think this position is very busy and lifestyle and so I think this always and don’t always disturb this person and and sometimes I always have a question and say this time

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