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Band 6+: Why do some people prefer to travel abroad rather than in their own country?

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I think people want to discover something new and explore new cultures, new people, and find new relationships, new friends, and new connections. For example, when I was in Turkey, I liked this experience because I had never met people like that before; I only met people in my local area, like only Russians. But when I was in Turkey, I met many different people and had a relationship with my German friend. Now I miss him. You can connect with each other from our world; I guess it's a very big opportunity.

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I think people want to discover something new and explore new culture, new people, like find some new relationships, new friends, new connections and so on. So for example, when I was in Turkey, I liked this experience because I’ve never met people like I Met only people in my local area like only russians, but when I was in Turkey I met many different people and Like Have a relationship with my German friend, but now I miss him so you can connect with each other from our world, I guess it’s a very big opportunity.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B2 - Upper Intermediate
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Vocabulary Repetition:

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turkey: 2

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Pronunciation

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Task Response

The response addresses the question but relies heavily on personal experience, which reduces its generality. To improve, focus on providing broader reasons for why people prefer international travel, such as the desire for unique experiences or different perspectives, rather than focusing on personal anecdotes.

Fluency & Coherence

The answer is generally coherent, but there are some hesitations and repetitions ('new,' 'like'). The structure is present but could be more developed. Try to minimize filler words and pauses by practicing speaking on similar topics.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate but not particularly sophisticated. The candidate uses words like 'discover,' 'explore,' 'relationships,' and 'connections,' which are appropriate. To improve, try to incorporate more varied and precise vocabulary related to travel and cultural experiences.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The grammar is mostly accurate, but there are some errors ('I've never met people like I Met only people'). The range of structures is somewhat limited. Focus on using a wider variety of sentence structures and tenses accurately. For example, use more complex sentences and conditional clauses.

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