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Band 7+: Why do some people want to start their own business?

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People want to run their own business because they will have freedom and independence. They can pursue their own passion and have the potential for significant financial gain. The most important thing is that they are not answerable to anybody. They can make their own decisions, and essentially being their own boss is the major motivator behind every entrepreneur.

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People who want to run their own business because they will have freedom and independence. They can pursue their own passion and potential for a significant financial gain. And the most important thing is they are not answerable to anybody. They can make their own decisions and essentially being their own boss is the major motivator behind every underbron.

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This is an excellent response that fully addresses the question. The answer is concise, well-structured, and provides a range of reasons why people start their own businesses. Consider exploring the challenges of entrepreneurship to provide a more balanced perspective.

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Grammar is mostly accurate, with only a minor error ('underbron'). The sentence structures are varied, but some could be improved for greater complexity and precision. For example, the phrasing 'they are not answerable to anybody' could be made more sophisticated. Overall, the grammar is good enough for a high band score.

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