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Band 7+: Why do young people change things very often than older people? Why do some people prefer buy things in online rather than buying in supermarkets?

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While online shopping has gained immense popularity in recent years, some people still prefer to shop in supermarkets. Firstly, supermarkets offer a wide range of products that can be physically examined and touched, allowing customers to assess their quality. This makes supermarkets convenient and cost-effective for those who are indecisive shoppers. Secondly, due to the competitive nature of the supermarket industry, they frequently advertise discounts, providing a fantastic opportunity to purchase items at lower prices and save money on their overall budgets.

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Even though online shopping is becoming most popular in the last few years, but still some people are purchasing in the supermarkets. First of all, supermarkets offer wide range of products that can be tested and touched to know the quality of the products. In this regard, this market is convenient and cost effective for those who are whimsical customers. Secondly, due to the competitive environment among markets, they frequently advertise discounts that give a splendid opportunity toaper, uh, to buy cheaper things and can economize their final budgets.

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Task Response

The answer only addresses the second part of the question. The student should have also addressed the first part of the question about why young people change things more often than older people. The answer is relevant and provides some good reasons for preferring supermarkets over online shopping, but it would be stronger if it addressed both parts of the question.

Fluency & Coherence

The answer is generally well-organized and coherent. The student uses some cohesive devices effectively, such as 'firstly' and 'secondly'. However, there are a few minor hesitations and repetitions, such as 'toaper, uh, to buy' which could be smoothed out with more practice.

Lexical Resource

The student uses a good range of vocabulary, including words like 'whimsical', 'competitive', and 'splendid'. However, there are a few instances of less precise language, such as 'cost effective' and 'cheaper things', which could be replaced with more sophisticated synonyms.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The student demonstrates a good grasp of grammar, with only a few minor errors. For example, the phrase 'Even though online shopping is becoming most popular in the last few years, but still some people are purchasing in the supermarkets' is grammatically incorrect. The student should avoid using 'but' after 'even though'. Overall, the grammar is accurate and the student uses a variety of sentence structures.

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