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Band 7+: Why do young people change things very often than older people? Why do some people prefer buy things in online rather than buying in supermarkets?

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Youngsters tend to change things more than older people because their level of curiosity is different. They are eager to embrace new things and want to follow trends. For example, iPhone is releasing new models frequently. The iPhone company is making new series regularly, and youngsters, despite the fact that there is nothing wrong with their current models, still want to upgrade to the latest version. They really want to be involved. They are more concerned about being engaged. Unlike adults, these developments don't have much effect on them. They don't care about the latest; they just want convenience.

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Youngsters tend to change things more than other people because their level of fantasy is different. They are eager to embrace new things. They want to follow trends, and so on. For example, iPhone is making new series. The iPhone companies are making new series every day, and the Youngsters despite the fact that there is nothing wrong with their current form, they still want to change to the latest series. They really want to be involved. They are more concerned about being involved. Unlike the adults, these developments really don’t have any effect on them. They don’t care about the latest from all who they want, it’s a convenience.

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Vocabulary Repetition:

they: 5

want: 4

youngsters: 2

things: 2

their: 2

iphone: 2

models: 2

about: 2

don't: 2

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Pronunciation

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Your pronunciation is average. It is understandable but not always accurate. Focusing on the rhythm and stress patterns of English could prove beneficial.

Task Response

The answer is well-organized and addresses both parts of the question. The example of iPhones is relevant and illustrative. To improve, consider expanding on the reasons why older people might be less inclined to change things frequently, and provide a more balanced comparison between online and supermarket shopping preferences. More specific examples for the second part of the question would also strengthen the response.

Fluency & Coherence

The answer is coherent and mostly fluent. There's a slight stumble in the middle where the explanation about iPhones feels a bit tangential. Improving the transition between the general point and the example would enhance fluency. Consider using smoother connecting words like 'for instance' or 'to illustrate'.

Lexical Resource

Vocabulary is adequate and mostly precise. Words like "eager to embrace" and "concerned about being involved" show good range. However, 'involved' could be replaced with a more precise word like 'engaged' or 'up-to-date'. The phrase 'from all who they want' is unclear and needs rephrasing.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

Grammar is mostly accurate with a good range of structures. There are a few minor inaccuracies, such as the use of 'despite the fact that' which is slightly wordy. The sentence 'They don't care about the latest from all who they want, it's a convenience' is grammatically incorrect and needs restructuring. Overall, grammatical accuracy is high.

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