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Band 6+: Why is it important to have parks in the city?

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The first and foremost reason is that it creates spaces for people to go outside, and they can have a place to exercise after their hard-working day. You know, the city is covered with a lot of dust and has very noisy traffic on the roads. Parks in the city can enhance the livability of the area, and they also provide people with a more peaceful environment in life. Okay.

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The first and foremost reason is that it creates some spaces for people to go outside with different and they can have a space to do exercise after their hard-working day. and you know in the city cover with a lot of dust and very noisy traffic in the road and the park in the city can enhance the noisy of the city and it also plays for people to have more peaceful in life. Okay.

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