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Band 6+: Why is it important to have parks in the city?

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Many people argue that every city should have its own parks and public spaces because people can relax, play, and stroll there. I share this opinion because cities are very crowded, and people need a place to escape. They can go to parks and other areas to spend time in a peaceful and enjoyable environment. So, I think parks are very important.

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Many people argue that every city has its own parks and public place because people can relax there and play also stroll. And it is opinion too in my view because city is very crowded and so people avoid the situation, they can go parks and other place and they can spend time unfollowed and enjoyable. So I think parts is very important.

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