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Band 6+: Would people's shopping behaviour be affected in a shop with music?

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Of course it would change the behavior of people's shopping because when you listen to music, you are more likely to go to the store and enjoy it, especially when it’s your favorite music. Because of this, it actually addresses some advertising tricks for shops to play music in their stores. People who listen to this music feel more stimulated to shop.

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Of course it would change behavior of any actually people’s shopping behavior because when you listen to the music you would like to go to the store and listen it’s more especially when it comes with your favorite music and because of this it is actually at address some advertisements trick for shops to play music in the actually their stores and people with this with lessened this music more stimulated to shopping

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music: 4

because: 2

listen: 2

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Pronunciation

Your pronunciation is above average. However, you may find complexity in certain words challenging. Regular practice should aid in improvement.

Task Response

The answer is relevant to the question and demonstrates some understanding of the topic. However, it mainly focuses on the positive effects of music on shopping behavior and lacks a balanced discussion of potential negative impacts or other factors that might influence shopping behavior. Consider exploring a wider range of effects and providing more specific examples to support your points.

Fluency & Coherence

The answer is understandable but lacks fluency. There's some repetition and self-correction. Work on smoother transitions between ideas and avoid unnecessary phrases like "actually" which are used repeatedly. Practice speaking more naturally and confidently.

Lexical Resource

Vocabulary is adequate but could be more precise. Phrases like "lessened this music more stimulated to shopping" are unclear. Focus on using more sophisticated and accurate vocabulary to express your ideas clearly and concisely. Consider synonyms for words like 'stimulated'.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

Grammar contains several errors, particularly in sentence structure and word order. For example, "when you listen to the music you would like to go to the store and listen it's more especially" is grammatically incorrect. Focus on improving sentence structure and accuracy. Practice using a wider range of grammatical structures.

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