Bar Chart

Band 5+: 15. The chart shows the information relating to people within 15-minute drive service in a particular region in UK. It also compares the people living in urban areas and people living in rural areas. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information given below.

See all user-written answers on this topic

Image for topic: 15. The chart shows the information relating to people within 15-minute drive service in a particular region in UK. It also compares the people living in urban areas and people living in rural areas. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information given below.

Our system will evaluate the answer based on this AI-generated description.

The image displays percentages of people within a 15-minute drive service for four amenities in urban and rural areas, detailing: doctors (urban 100%, rural 70%), post office (urban 100%, rural 75%), primary school (urban 90%, rural 80%), secondary school (urban 100%, rural 60%).

Given the complexity of the image, the above description may not be entirely accurate.

Skyrocket your IELTS band score by 1-2 points in under a month with our premium plan!

Check it out

Note: Both the topic and the answer were created by one of our users.

The chart demonstrates the proportion of people within 15-minute drive service in a region in United Kingdom. Also, there are two categories of comparing: the people living in urban areas and people living in rural areas.

Overall, it can be seen a clear difference between two locations. In contrast to primary school drivers, all services were much more time taking. However, individuals in cities showed the highest level of drive services from whole categories, such as post office, doctor, primary school, and secondary school.

Primary school drivers in rural areas presented considerably smaller than citizens, at approximately 40%. On the other hand, countryside post officers were slightly lower by around 7%. The categories of doctor and secondary school showed the same level of delivering time, about 100%. Additionally, primary school passengers from countryside had the lowest percentage, at roughly 60%.

In developed locations, all clients remained relatively stable. Nevertheless, the figure for rural post office showed a slight difference with others, at around 20%, whereas all types of services presented the same level of driving within 15 minute.

Word Count: 178

Check Your Answer On This Topic?

Check My Answer

Generate A Band-9 Sample Answer?

Generate A Sample

Overall Band Score

5.5

(+/- 0.5)

Vocabulary Complexity:
C2 - Complex
Continue to challenge and refine your language choices.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

school: 5

people: 3

categories: 3

rural: 3

primary: 3

services: 3

showed: 3

level: 3

Try using synonyms for the above words

Task Response

The report generally addresses the requirements of the task, but there are some inaccuracies and a lack of specific data. The overview is acceptable, but the body paragraphs contain some misinterpretations of the data. For example, the report states "Primary school drivers in rural areas presented considerably smaller than citizens, at approximately 40%", which is incorrect. Also, the report states "the categories of doctor and secondary school showed the same level of delivering time, about 100%", which is only true for urban areas. To improve, focus on accurately representing the data and providing specific figures to support your statements. Also, ensure that you are comparing and contrasting the data effectively.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report lacks clear organization and paragraphing. The flow of information is disrupted by abrupt transitions and a lack of clear connections between sentences and paragraphs. For instance, the shift from the overall trend to specific details in the second paragraph is not smooth. The report would benefit from a more structured approach, such as dedicating separate paragraphs to urban and rural areas or organizing by service type. Using cohesive devices (e.g., 'furthermore,' 'in contrast,' 'similarly') more effectively would also improve the flow.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is generally adequate for the task, but there are instances of imprecise word choice and awkward phrasing (e.g., 'time taking,' 'primary school drivers,' 'countryside post officers,' 'developed locations'). Expanding the range of vocabulary and using more precise language would enhance the clarity and sophistication of the report. For example, instead of 'time taking,' consider using 'accessible' or 'within reach.' Instead of 'primary school drivers', consider 'access to primary schools'.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains several grammatical errors that affect clarity. These include incorrect verb tenses ('presented considerably smaller'), subject-verb agreement issues ('services were much more time taking'), and awkward sentence structures ('individuals in cities showed the highest level of drive services from whole categories'). Correcting these errors and improving sentence structure would significantly enhance the grammatical accuracy and overall readability of the report. Pay close attention to article usage, preposition choice, and the correct use of comparative structures.

Answers On The Same Topic:

See All

The bar graphs shows the shares of expenditure in five categories

The bar chart depicts expenditures for five huge categories in four countries: the USA, Canada, the UK and Japan in 2009. Overall, generally all four countries had the highest percentage shares in first three categories ( food, housing and transportation), while those of health care and clothing were the lowest throughout the period. Starting with […]

Band 6+

the chart below shows the most visited museums in pakistan in 2024. summarise all the information in the chart below

The bar graph compares the most visited museums in Pakistan in 2024. Overall, the number of the visitors was highest in August while, June recorded the lowest number of visitors, in contrast July and September had the same figure. In June, 300 people visited the Maritime Museum, similarly 300 visitors visited the Maritime Museum in […]

Band 5+

The chart below shows the expenditure of two countries on customer goods in 2010.

The provided bar chart illustrates the amount of money France and the UK spent on consumer goods, such as cars, computers, books, perfume, and cameras in 2010. Units measured in pounds sterling. Overall, the UK spent more money on consumer goods than France in the period given. Both coutries spent most of money on cars. […]

Band 6+

The chart below shows how people travelled to work in three cities in 2023. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart compares several transports which people used to commute in three different cities labelled as city A, B, C in 2023. Overall, cars were the main transport vehicle to travel to the work, while the reverse was true for on foot. Additionally, workers in city C used all four vehicles in balance. Focusing […]

Band 6+

The chart compares the average cost per kilogram of clothing imported by the European Union from six major source countries in 1997 and 2003. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The given chart illustrates the average price per kilogram of clothing purchased by European Union from six different nations between 1997 and 2003. Overall, it is obvious that clothing imported from Argentina and Brazil were the most expensive throughout the period. Conversely, the cost of clothing from Asian countries witnessed significant growth, except for Japan […]

Band 7+

the graph below shows the amount of energy generated wind in four countries in the period 1980-2000

The bar chart illustrates changes in the amount of wind energy generated in India, Denmark, Germany and the United States between 1985 and 2000. Overall, wind energy generation was higher in all four countries at the end of the period than at the beginning. Although the United States was the largest producer initially, Denmark had […]

Band 8+

See All

Check Your Answer On This Topic?

Generate A Band-9 Sample Answer?

Overall Band Score

Task Response

Coherence & Cohesion

Lexical Resource

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

Answers On The Same Topic:

Other Topics:

Plans & Pricing

Free

Premium