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Band 5+: A chart shows the changes in the total population of England and Wales from 1700 to 2000 and changes in birth and death rates. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image displays a line graph with data from 1700 to 2000, tracking Population size (in million) on a left axis and Birth & Death Rate (per 1000 people) on a right axis, both scaled 0-60. Population size data points are: 1700 (~2.5), 1750 (~10), 1800 (~3), 1850 (~10), 1900 (~25), 1950 (~45), and 2000 (50). Birth rate data points (per 1000 people) are: 1700 (~30), 1750 (~40), 1800 (~40), 1850 (~32), 1900 (~30), 1950 (~22), and 2000 (~34). Death rate data points (per 1000 people) are: 1700 (~26), 1750 (~37), 1800 (~37), 1850 (~26), 1900 (~27), 1950 (20), and 2000 (20).

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The given line graph gives the information about changes in total population of two countries, such as England and Wales between 1700 and 2000. In addition, data about the alterations in birth and death rates.

Overall, it is clear that the amount of population size increased dramatically during the period. Meanwhile, the numbers in both of the birth and death groups simmilarly underwent fluctuation in this chart.

First of all, in terms of largest amount, it was shown by population size’s group. This category started with approximately 2 million people in first year, before signifficantly inreased to 10,000,000 by 1750. After that, this figure againstly decreased to previously number after 50 years. As flies time, citizens size notably rose and reached to the peakest amount with about 50 millions of people by the end of the period.

When it comes to numbers in classification of birth and death, while it is true, both of them underwent increasingly numbers, year by year this figure fell to 20 or 25 millions at the end of the period.

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The report addresses the task but contains some inaccuracies and generalizations. The description of the population size fluctuations is generally accurate, but the birth and death rate descriptions lack specific details and contain some inaccuracies. The writing is also somewhat repetitive and could benefit from more precise language. To improve, focus on providing more specific data points and avoid generalizations. Also, ensure accuracy in reporting the data and use a wider range of vocabulary to describe the trends.

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The report demonstrates an attempt to organize information into paragraphs, but the flow of ideas could be improved. Transitions between sentences and paragraphs are sometimes abrupt, making it harder for the reader to follow the analysis. For example, the shift from the overview to the detailed description of population size lacks a smooth transition. Consider using more cohesive devices to link ideas and improve the overall coherence.

Lexical Resource

The report uses a limited range of vocabulary, with some inaccuracies in word choice ('amount of population size,' 'simmilarly underwent fluctuation'). There is also some awkward phrasing ('as flies time,' 'peakest amount'). To improve, focus on expanding your vocabulary related to describing trends and changes, and pay attention to using more precise and natural language.

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The report contains several grammatical errors, including incorrect verb tenses ('gives the information,' 'signifficantly inreased'), subject-verb agreement issues ('numbers in both of the birth and death groups simmilarly underwent fluctuation'), and misuse of prepositions ('in terms of largest amount'). Sentence structure is also sometimes awkward and unclear. To improve, focus on reviewing basic grammar rules and practicing writing with a variety of sentence structures.

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